Onces upon a time there were to boys named griff and Elliot.They both have A.D.H.D that made them doodle a lot.Elliot loves To go on adventures and play sports also he goes to an art school,and he has a friend named Griff.Griff is smart and as you can guess he goes to art school and has his dad work as c.e.o of a Computer lab and has a lot of Valuables.and one Friday afternoon panting Africa.Griff had soe his dad’s friend bad coming into school,and he wondered why ,had something gone bad at work he thought.It Took him about a few seconds to find him. He knocked on the door, “AAAAA!” mr.chicken screamed! and sed in a shaky voice “c-c-come in”. Bad came in and told Mr. chicken that he needed to go in a break out room with griff mr.chicken said’ yes but if he brings him back to class before 3:00’.They went to the breakout room Bad said”I have some bad news your dad got kidnapped by the worst villain in the world”!Griff jumped in the air’’ b-b-but why’’ he said’’ to Bad “we have very important stuff that kood destroy Canada’’. ’’But you’re a Computer company, why would you have that’’?’’ I can not tell you, need to save him’’.’’why me’’,’’ because we need to keep it safe’’.’’ But I thought scar got it’’,’’no” said Bad “but he got your dad’’.Griff got back to class and after that class they went home then Giff told Elliot everything that bad had said.Griff and Elliot both got home,

than Elliot got an idea it was like a bullet shot into him.he got to his bed room and just lied down on his bed and could not go to sleep.He woke up the next morning and got dressed and brushed his teeth and rust down stairs and found his mom making cereal for him but did not stop to eat he ran! He stopped in front of griffs house, he knocked on the door, no one answered. He knocked again, nothing. He looked inside the window, no one was there.He knocked again he heard a person coming down the stairs, it was griff. Griff opened the door and Griff said “come in”. Elliot sat down on the couch “so what brings you here at 8:00”. “I have an idea we have to go and save him, your dad”. “ what”said griff “ it’s way to dangerous for two kids to go” “yea I know but your dad he is probably getting tortured right now” said Elliot “yea I know” “so,we should go” “ fine but if we don’t get there in time my dad will be died” “let’s not think on the dark side show we ” Elliot said “all right so we should make a plan for our trip,now we need supplies and food and water”.And in 30 minutes they had got everything for the trip “ok let’s go through our stuff”said Elliot, “water check food check money check climbing gear check mini boat that can fit in a backpack chek life jackets check pocket knife check lighter check,well I think that is all”said Elliot. “Oh when are we going”said griff “now” “n-n-now” “yes we need to go now” “w-w-why now” “ remember, that your dad is probably getting tortured right now” “oh yea then I guess we should go”. And they were of “where are we going” said griff “oh,yea we are going to your dad’s work” Griff looked confused “because we need to know where to go”. So they went to his dad’s office to look for clues. They came to a holt in front of the office. It was huge,”Griff have you ever been here before” asked Elliot “no”. They knocked on the door, the door swung open and they sow a fountain with jaguars on it and be the looks of it 100 workers.They went to the front desk and sow a bold man with a crooked nose.he said”can I help you children”he said in a sad voice “yes you can help us,we need to see bad I think he is a worker here”? “yes he is,and why do you need to see him”.said the man “because we need to asked him questions” “questions ay,why” “ we are going to get griffs dad back and destroy Scar” the man looked stunned “kill scare,good luck with that” “so you can help by leading to his office” “well ok but kill scare that takes a lot of skill”.

 they went to a weird elevator packed with people, him and Elliot were squeezed together finally they stopped a voice came out from the elevator “level 7 the lawn force meant” the man voice came out “well this is our stop.” Griff and Elliot both squeezed out of the elevator and followed the man to a big office on the top of it said “31 head of law enforcement” they stepped in the office and two big people that were standing in front of a door and the man murmured “Bad” the two big people stepped aside and opened the door and they stepped in their was bad sitting on a chairing front of a big desk with thousands of paper.The man went out of the room they heard a door shut then bad said “what are you doing here griff” asked bad “we are here to know were scar went”Elliot said bad looked shocked but said “I thought you would be here” he hissed.“well here we are,now where is he”said Elliot “I only know were he was” “where”screamed Elliot “in Africa” both Elliot and griff looked at each other then bad said “maybe he left I do not know but it is probably a good place to look” “where did he kidnap griffs dad” “follow me” bad led them out of his office and into the elevator.they got out and heard the voice “level 12,head of the office ceo” they got out and saw a big sign c.e.o they stepped in the office it was gross there was slime on the floor and the walls no furniture and one picture on the wall, griff was moving toward it and bad yelled “don’t go near it” “he is fine” Elliot yelled back “anyone you know griff” asked Elliot “yes, I think it is my mom” then griff was moving to bad “what was my dads last words”he stammered “I do not know,I was looking at the people in the hospital” “ bring me to the person that was in the room” “I do not know who was in there at the time” “ I know you know you are just to have to keep it a secret” “fine I know,his last words were save the kid keep the kid safe please” “I know where I’m going to, my dads grave” “then I’m going to” yelled Elliot “but it is not safe for you to go” “I was the one to go anyway and now you do not want me to go” “fine you can go with me but it is not my fault if you die” “fine”.And of they went Elliot did not know  were Griff was going but he followed,they stopped in front of a giant river and before Elliot could speak Griff poled out the life jackets and the mini bout and they set sale. Right when Elliot shouted “watch out” they hit a rock the boat popped and Elliot went flying in the air then griff shouted “noooooooo” and Elliot landed on his ankle and with a screech of pain and he fainted! He woke  up the next morning and sow Griff handing money to a man then griff turned to Elliot and he said “your alive” and hugged him then Elliot said “who are you”pointing at the man “I’m Fred and I used to work for your Griffs dad here he was a great man but I left him a worked for a bank but he did not liked when I told him I left” “but how did you get here” “when I heard that your mom was dead I wanted to see her grave and why are you guys doing here” “Griff wanted to see his mom’s grave” Elliot told Fred.Well I will see you there “or you could come with us Fred” “really I don’t know well what are you doing” “first I want to know how it took you so long to find out my mom was dead” “well I was talking to this man at a bar and I was telling him about my work at the lab and mentioned your mom so the guy said “you mean the minister’s wife oh she’s dead  she died like 10 years ago ” then I started to go to her grave and I see you too”. “So what are you doing here and why do you need to see your mom’s grave I would have thought that you soe it like 10 times” “we are going to my mom’s grave because I remember when I went there the first time and my dad putting down a note and I’m also coming here to save my dad because that not mite give me a clue to where to go” “so are you coming fred” said Elliot after griff finished “yes I will come and I will help save your dad because I oh him” so they went of. They came across a large group of people around a grave then fred spock out “well we are here” they stepped in the crowd and soe the note a picked it up and read it.It said “If scar takes me please go to mount tam and if you see a cave on the back with silver dots I’m there mout tam is in California in San Francisco take a plane to California there is money in the note just say money and it is only for griff and me it will open” “ok” said griff “money” it burst into life and thousands of dollars came out and a voice came out “mount tam mount tam mount tam mount tam”. “Well we are going to San Francisco” said fred they collected all the money and set off they when through juggles and mountains and finally they sow the plane station and they rushed thought all they people and found ari California they climbed on board and set off when they reached there seats sow bad walking and sat behind them griff nudged Elliot and whisper “bad just sat behind us” “what do you think he wants in USA” “I do not know but he did not know tiss us” “then why is he moving to us” “fred fred fred bad is here” “what” “yea he is behind us” “well sorry to interrupt your chat but what are you doing here griff oh and fred” “minister how dreadful to see you again”. “Yes indeed very dreadful well griff” “oh I found out that he is in San Francisco USA” “sir can you sit down the flight is about to start” “yes ma’am” “that was weird” said Elliot “yea” said Fred “I hate that guy he is the worst he is such a liar” “yea we know he lied to us about my dads last words’’ “what he lied about that he really wants to be C.E.O of the company” “what that means that he sent scar” “no he did not sent Scar he to stupid to do that and he is not a follower” “maybe he is a follower” “I agree with Elliot because bad does not even know how to drive a car” “yea I guess”. They landed  and got off the plane and letting bad go far a head it was hot in sf the sun was shining. The sky was blue. They got in a taxi and told the man to go to a hotel. They got of the taxi and looked up into a beautiful hotel they stepped in a went to a desk griff handed the money to fred and stepped aside “so were can we get a room good sir”said fred “there is a open room for you level 7 535 3 beds 2 bath rooms and lots of snacks for the kids and a tv that would be $10,000 dollars fred handed him the money and the man gave him the keys they set of in the elevator. When they reached their level and spite to find there room there where thousands of doors then a voice came out “found it” ,it sounded like Elliot voice then another voice “coming” it was Fred’s voice then his voice “be there” he rushed down the stairs up a corredor and found Fred and Elliot looking astonished then he looked and he found out quickly the room was amazing they stepped in 3 beds 2 bathrooms and food they rushed to the food they were hungry there were cookies and skittles and candy everywhere and snacks to Sunday’s to hot dogs to burgers. After they ate Griff wanted to get a plan for what to do they went over the plan like 50 times.The next day they set of to mount tam they got in a taxi and told the guy to go to mount tam and the whole entire time they discuss the plan it took like an 5 hours to get there it is almost dark they set of the hike they looked everywhere then fred said what did it say to look “a black cave with silver dots” “not much of a clue if you ask me” “but nobody ask you” “for get it” they finally found it.It had the silver dots and it was black they stepped in with caution there were no lites the boom the cave was now filled with lite there were people in tubes unconscious then they soe him he was in a chair petting a Wolverine and then it barked at us then he said in a deep voice “I know there here”.He got up and in front of them “you brot friends more to tremble I will not kill you I will take you” “take us” “your building an army and how are you going to get them everyone hates you” “doing this” he pressed a button on his chair the tubes started to tremble the hole mountain  shock the tubes where opening people were starting to come out of them Griff and Elliot both took a knife and sliced theo them fred kicked and punched.then griff soe a sword he rushed to it picked it up and then said “cover me” Fred and Elliot came rushing toward him and kicked and sliced and griff soe Scar press the button again but nothing happen so he rushed and stopped scar was rushing to him now he stood his ground and scar jumped over him and behind him he sliced him on his back then griff pushed the sword into scar there’re was silence he pulled the sword out of him and then the the people that were fighting Elliot and Fred  changed into real people then a burst of celebration and hugs and then Griff soe his dad they rushed and hugged “did I do the right thing” “yes you did yes you did”.They got back to Canada and found a big group of people there waiting for them but they did not even bother them Fred went back to work for my dad and Elliot and Griff made their way back into school “well it was an exciting trip but I like it here more”.

THE END.                                                                                                                        by Tristan Bercovitch About the Author

Well I was born in San Francisco. I’m 9 Years old and a lot of my family lives in Canada. I have a dad and a mom and a brother. I have more books like my dog died.I love books and write a lot.I play lots of sports like hockey, soccer, basketball and baseball.Hope you enjoyed it.